People should carefully plan activities for their free time. |
Some people say leisure should be planned through consideration. Well structured plans of course, reduce unnecessary time waste and eventually able to use the leisure time more fruitfully. However, despite the benefit, I think the leisure time should not be so rigid because no matter how people use their leisure time effectively, it turns to meaningless activity if the time doesn’t end with relaxation. A lot of people choose to take leisure time in order to get rid of restricted and oppressed routine derived from intolerant schedule and inflexible society. Yet, even if the leisure requires those constrictions, it contradicts the main purpose of leisure. For example, my neighbor is such a workaholic and applies his business habits on his leisure time. Eventually, he couldn’t free him self from the restriction and indeed his relaxation was hampered. On the other hand, his brother, filled with docility, truly relieved himself and could delve back into his occupation after the recess. Therefore, in my opinion, averting sharp scheduling about leisure affords authentic tranquility to the leisurer. Spontaneous decisions according to different circumstances are another reason for my oppression of restricted leisure. As people get affected by weather, season, or temperature, they indeed have various forms of stresses depending on the situations. Thus, it is necessary to allow people to decide what they want spontaneously, referring to the kind of stress they received from work. This also offers people a surprising and unanticipated events which upheavals the thrill of leisure time. In conclusion, deliberations are indeed indispensable for sensitive affairs, but for the leisure, the pleasure of free wills and spontaneity far outweighs well projected stability.
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