■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree with the statement, "Learning about the past does not have value for those of us living in the present." Give specific reason and examples to support your answer. | |
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Some people says learning about the past is not helpful because the time have already passed. Do you think it is true? There are so many things that we can learn from the past. In addition, we cannot live without knowing what we have experienced.
First of all, when we concern our past, we can get profits by reminding it. We do not make same mistakes when we learn about the past. We can prevent from disasters or mistakes we usually makes. For example, after when I took a math exam and checked the answer, I always realize that I have mistaken the similar kind of question that I have got wrong before. If I have solved the math problem what I have got wrong over and over, I would have solved the math problems right. This problem happens because I always do not concern the past.
Secondly, we can get informations when we are in trouble. We can check the past if we have problems how we have solved the problem in the past. For example, when my computer broke down, I tried to look on the internet how to solve the problem based on people who has been in similar situation with me. It helped me alot because there are all clear steps to fix it, made my feeling comfortable because they have had fixed already and I also felt my computer has already been fixed. In this regard, I think learning about the past is valuable for me in the similar situations.
As a result, I think learning about the past is valuable for us living in the present because it gives us wisdoms not to make a similar mistakes and helps us to overcome the problem that we are onto. | |
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