We can see two different point of view when concerning whether school requires students to wear a uniform. Some people say that it interrupts student's right, wearing clothese that they want.:Some people say that it violates students' right to wear whatever they want. However, I think that wearing an uniform in the school makes encourages students more concentrating to concentrate more on their study, and also they can save money. Moreover, wearing an uniform is better for students feel sense of clossness closeness.
First of all, students will more concentrate more on their study if they don't have to care about what clothes they would take put on.(:take on은 겨루다 혹은 회사에서 사람을 뽑다 이런 뜻으로 쓰입니다^^ take off ↔ put on) Every morning, students worry about which clothes are better for the day. Most students don't want to be seemed from others that they have only one clothes, so they will try to wear different clothes each day. However,if they wear a school uniform, they can stop worrying about it. Hence, the students can concentrate on their study.
Secondly, wearing a school uniform is more beneficbeneficial, when realizing that they can even save money. Since they wear an uniform in school, they don't have to spend money for shopping clothes. As a student, what they have to more consider about is about their study, therefore they can buy books instead of shopping for their wardrobe with the money that they saved instead of shopping. In this regard, I think wearing an uniform in school should be a requirement.
Last, When students wear an uniform, they will feel a strong sense of clossness each other since the uniform makes uniforms give students more feel a stronger sense of belonging.(:내용이 중복됩니다~ 심플하게~~) In particular, when people students encounter others wearing the same uniform at some place by accident, the people they will more glad nice to them.(:people 대신엔 문맥에 어울리게 students 그리고 glad-기쁘다 보단 nice-친철하다 가 어울립니다^^) To take my experience, when I was a high school student, I got lost one time at a strange place that I had never been there before.(:하지만 스트레인지 플레이스가 한번도 못가본 장소라는 뜻이므로 중복적인 말이긴 합니다~..I got lost in a place I had never been before) At that time, I met a person who wearing the same uniform as me by chance, and I could got helped from him. Finally, I could come back home. I thought think that It was possible because we were wearing the same uniform, so he was willing to help me out.(:내 생각이므로 현재형을 써주시고 ! 교복을 입은 그 친구가 다른 사람들 보다 더 친절했다는 것을 어필했음 합니다 ~직접 데려다 줬다거나 먼저 도와주겠다고 나섰다는 식으로..)
To conclude, I think that wearing a school uniform is better for students. Not only does it makes students more to concentrate more on their study, but it also it will be a way helps to save money. In addition, students can a feel stronger bond when they see others wearing the same uniform outside with their peers. |