Whether constructing a large factory near our community is advantageous is under debate. It may be true that it helps to yield more jobs that people can work in the factory. However, I think that we should make the constructing stop near our community since it causes noise, and pollution. Moreover, social problem will frequently happen after lots of people converge to this area. Moreover, as population increases, social problems will also rise. (*빨간색 볼드는 밑줄친 문장의 다른 suggestion이니 참고하세요 ^^)
First of all, if a company announces to build a large factory near our community, most people will worry about the noise from the construction. To build a huge factory much heavy equipment is needed which usually make too much noise. Therefore, many people, especially children or older people, suffer from the noise, moreover, students who usually study at home will not be able to concentrate on their study. In this regard, the construction plan should be canceled.
Second reason why I think that building a large factory near our community is disadvantageous is that it will definitely pollute, especially it brings about air pollution. While constructing the factory, heavy equipments such as trucks or backhoes will emit a lot of dust and Co2. Therefore, many people will suffer from disease such as a respiratory disease.
Last, once the constructing starts near our community, numerous people converge to this area to work. Therefore, some social problems will frequently occur such as larceny or theft. Most those of these kinds of social problems occur in crowded areas, according to the police, so we can definitely see that many the rate of theft or larceny happens will increase if our community becomes more crowded.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that constructing a large factory near our community will cause some problems; it first of all brings about lots of noise, and air pollution that people suffer from. In addition, social people problems(이건 그냥 오타이신거같네요^^;) can occur more frequently. |