■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Some people might say that luck is one of the most crucial factors in one's successful life. However, I think that working hard actually makes one's life succeed because it creates more opportunities in one's career and people who succeed only with their luck would meet the limitation after all.
First of all, when working hard, more chances will be followed. As we put lots of efforts into our career, more opportunities to succeed will come naturally. To illustrate, I have a friend who is a violinist. He started playing violin at his age fifteen, which is the quite late age to start playing a musical instrument. He practiced extremely hard for more than eight hours every day at a practice room. A violin professor who usually taught students in the same building heard my friend's playing and she was very impressed by his efforts and enthusiasm toward music. She offered free lessons to him and taught him with passion and now he became a great violinist in a famous orchestra in Korea.
Second, we cannot expect that luck will be on our sides always. Luck can happen rarely and that is not actually one's ability. For instance, my cousin got a job luckily in a small, starting company which offered a high salary and lots of benefits because there were very few applicants. After a year, she felt her limitation when she was working, since she was not a capable person and also was not ready to work professioanlly. Thus, she had to quit the job and go back to school to earn more knowledge.
To summarze, even though an opinion that luck does has lots to do in one's success may exist, I do not agree with that. I strongly believe that to lead a successful life, people should put more efforts instead of expecting their luck only. | |
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