주4일 근무제에 대한 의견 - 리딩에는 긍정적 측면 나와있었습니다. |
The lecturer describes an actual experience in companies with four-day workweek. This casts doubts on the reading passage’s argument that four-day work system is beneficial to employers, employees and the general economy. First of all, employers go through some problems with this system in managing their employee. They should reach their productivity to the point they did before so they have to employ more staff. Consequently, it costs more money not only to provide facilities for them but also to keep their insurance. It is natural they have higher risk to get hurt because they have more time to spend other activities. Second, thirty-two hours work system is not beneficial to employee. The lecturer explore that employees don’t have time to improve their skill through work. They are just busy to keep up with their portion of whole work. On the top of that, companies want to higher promoted professions to increase their efficiency. It makes employees feel their job is unstable and competitive to survive. Then they got stressed out. Finally, this four-day work system is not good for economy. They don’t have time to concentrate on goods’ quality because they are just busy to complete the same amount of work as they did for more time in the past. In the long run, it causes low moral of employees and then, it won’t be health, diverse, productive market contrary to the reading passage. |
글자수가 220넘는데 괜찮은가요? 제가 알기로 독립형은 많이 쓸 수 있음 쓰는게 좋은데..
통합형은 잘 모르겠네요...170-220 이 적당하다고 하니깐,,,,길면 안좋은 건지도..ㅠ