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1). The reason that I don't love my country
Ok. I'll tell you why I don't love my country.
First of all, private education thing. Almost korean mothers are not satisfied with public education. I mean, they feel that they certainly need private education if they want that their children to get good grade. So, they spend a lof of money into those tings. I think they lock up their children in their these thinking. When the children grow up, they never study by themselves. They think, the only way to live is studying hard. Eventually, many childrens are not much experiencing except studying and they don't have any chances to think about their future because of their parents.
Secondly, almost students at University are same their goal, joining a Samsung company. They think it should be and they never do what they like. They don't even know what they love to do.
As you know, money doesn't guarantee happiness.
Thirdly, almost korean women have plastic surgery. They are losing their own face, original one.
..Korean women has same face. They don't have their character. What a sad thing?
Finally. there's no nine to five culture in Korea. To me, hobby is very improtant.
I don't want to live forever with only working.
That's all. but.. my country is quite good without these problems