■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :game teach us valuable lessons about life.
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In the rapiely changing world, game is a good way to releave stress. Some people say that playing game is a waste of time. However, in my opinion ,People can learn from a Game about life, That is because game teach us only a law abiding people could be a winner. Furthermore, poeple can improve cooperation among teammates.
To start with, people learn the importance of the observing rules through the playing game.
when children participate game, they realize that they should respect the rules to be a winner on the game.besides a fair playing is indespensible factor to fully enjoy the game. For example, when I was a student, There was a girls who did not observe a class rules. One day, Teacher let them play a board game. She explained the rules and warned them a offender would be vanished. Girls began the game, soon, one of them broke the rule:she did not pass the dies. Then, teacher eliminated her as she said. The girl ended up reflecting her attitude. As a result, she could understand the reason why we have to follow the rules.
On top of that, game facilitate a collavoration among people. In the game such as soccer or basket ball, teammates should collect the effort. It is significant factor for winning. For instance, last year , I was a member of the basket ball club. First day, me and friends were very akward. It is a matter of course that losing a game be cause we did not even know names of each other. But, our teamwork had developed by repeated practice. Through the several games we try to cooperate by concerning each other to be a winner. Finally we gained both of a victory and the felling of strong partnership.
To sum up, I firmly believe that playing games gives a sort of lesson about life. To be specific, people aware the importance of following social regulations. What's more, they can work together effectively by comprehension of consequence of it. It is true that these learnings are very important to success in one's life.
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저도 reason why 가 틀린 표현인 것은 압니다... 하지만 대체할 말을 못찾겠더군요.
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