" 컴퓨터 게임이 도움이 되느냐? 마느냐?"라고 나왔다던, 지난 시험문제에대한 글입니다.
처음으로 시간 정확히 지켜서 풀어본만큼, 여러분들의 평가를 간절히 바랍니다.
친절한 첨삭 해주신다면 더할나위 없겠지만, 읽어보시고 어느정도 수준인지 일러주셔도 많은 도움이 될 듯 합니다.
부탁드립니다.!!!^^ |
Many people think that computer games have not any advantages for their children's development especially in physical and mental states. Although I agree with people's opinion that playing with friends would be more helpful for the children's future, I believe that a computer game is beneficial to develop the children’s smartness.
First of all, playing computer games stimulates children’s brain activities to concentrate on the game. By doing so, children can enhance their concentration ability which lead a positive effect on children’s learning capacity. To illustrate this, there are many well-developed games for helping children’s smartness such as Nintendo DS. The certain program and stages on the games, Nintendo DS, encourages children to focus their thought on the game. If they pass the stages in a row, they can get some valuable information about history and geology. Children have chances to study the knowledge as well as opportunities to raise their concentration ability.
Moreover, many computer games allow children to get along with their peers by supporting the system called a multi-play mode. Several children can enroll a certain game by using the multi-play mode with network. Since the multi-play mode is used by the network, they enjoys the game regardless of the location of peers. For example, when I was a high school student, the most popular computer game in
For the reasons I mentioned above, I definitely believe that computer games the most valuable way to stimulate student’s brain abilities and socialize with the others. |