Being happy with the job is more important than having a high salary. |
It is debatable whether having enjoyable jobs is more crucial than a higher salary. Some people say that a higher salary makes our lives to be happier. However, I firmly believe the idea that having jobs make us to be happy is more important than gain more money because it is one of the best ways to live with happiness and it leads us to success. First of all, if we do not enjoy our job, our lives are(생략) should be unhappy. We spend so much time at our work place and company with co-workers so it accounts for significant part of our human relationship. If someone chooses a job for only higher salary, even he or she under stressful situations frequently from whose >> their tasks and co-worker, he must be exhausted and become unhappy. For example, one of my best friends Yoon-su entered a big company, Samsung electronics, and he have earned about 5 million dollar a year. He said that he though became happier than others because he obtained much money than others. However, as he said, he has never been happy since joining(분사 축약) the company. He has always worked too much and he realized that the job was unsuitable him. As seen this example, higher salary does not guaranty happy life. In addition, gaining enjoyable jobs is the best way to go success. We should work for almost 30 years since >> in order to maintain our daily lives and we should compete others so that >> to( so that 다음엔 주어 동사가 나와야죠) survive in society. If someone does not enjoy his or her works, he could not perform fully(조동사 부사 동사 목적어 순 입니다.) his own ability and he never succeed in his field. For instance, recent studies by Ji-sun Kim, one of the most famous economists, show that the more someone enjoys their job, the more they succeed in their area. She interviews almost one hundreds company owners and politicians for 3years and she concluded that. In conclusion, it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to gain higher salary because working happily gives us happy lives and lead us to success lives.
문법이 진짜 취약하거든요. 그렇다고 아이디어가 좋은것도 아닌-_- 틀린부분 자세히좀 평가 부탁드립니다. 난좀 혼나야돼!!^^ |