첫인상이 그 사람의 여러면을 말해 준다. |
Some psychologists maintain that first impression are important factor to define person's character, and people get used to determine others' personality and social position from their physical appearance.<걍 and 를 지우시고 독립적인 문장으로 쓰세요,,> Although the first impression has a great influence on people's perception of others' various aspects, I think that people should talk frequently with them in order to understand others' mind or lifestyle.<하늘색 과 파란색이 연결성이 살짝 부족한듯해요 파란색부분에는 우선 "그러나 나는 첫인상을 믿지않는다" 식의 문장을 쓰고 그리고 그 문장 다음부분에는 파란색으로 쓴 문장을 쓰시는게 자연스러울듯해요,,> Moreover, first impression can be distorted by certain situations. There are two reasons to support my ideas.
<ㄱ-,,솔직히 intro부분은 좀 뜯어 고치라고 하고싶네요,,작성자님의 입장을 분명하게 하지않았어요,,단지 파란색 문장으로 생각을 나타냈을뿐,,,,,첫인상이 그사람의 여러면을 말해준다 라는 거에 동의하는지 안하는지는 직적접으로 전혀 언급이 안됬잖아요,,> First of all, first impression is not always tell all about aspects of one person. in other words, there are a lot of people whose personality is totally different from their first impression.<여기서 살짝 더 구체적인 설명을햇으면 좋을듯,,물론 믿에 예가 나와있어 이해하기는 쉽지만,,ㅎㅎ> Therefore, if people try to know the real aspects of a person, they have to communicate with him or her and do a variety of activities. From my experience, When I was a college student, the first impression of my major academic advisor is strict and tough. At that time, I recognized him as a strict professor. However, as I made a conversation with him, I realized that he is a well-known maven and his personality was considerably humorous. In this sense, first impression is a just part of their physical appearance, and it can not tell a lot of information of people.
On top of that, it is more likely to First impression to be distorted by certain situation. To be specific, some people rarely express their personality at a officer situation. They are largely influenced by their social position or rule. Therefore, there are a lot of case< a lot of cases 아닌가,,?> that they need to express proper shape or appearance
In conclusion, I strongly believe that first impression do not tell a lot of aspects of people. As I mentioned above, first impression is a just physical appearance, and people should communicate with others to know them. Moreover, first impression is more likely changed a variety of situations. Therefore, people should be careful of determining a person's personality or lifestyle as a means of<아마도 by means of를 쓰려고 하신듯?>the perception of first impression. |