■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Qualities of parents blablabla, can't remember exactly | |
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Giving birth to a baby might give the name ‘parent’ to people, but there is more to being a parent than just having a baby. There are several factors that make a parent a good one. Among those, there are some that people think are the most important factors of being a parent. In my opinion, love, responsibility, and discipline are the most important factors.
To start with, parents must have love in their children. If a parent does not love the child, he or she should not be called a parent. Everything that a parent can do to a child starts from love. Without love, you cannot take care of your child, raise your child, or even hold the child in your arms. The baby will just be a lump of moving meat if the parent does not care for it with love.
Next, parents must have responsibility. For example, you can see many children these days in restaurants. Many of them run around yelling, annoying the other customers. A lot of unqualified parents leave them alone and do not take responsibility on what their children are doing. Some even fight back if someone complaints about it. My parents, for instance, raised me with great responsibility and always apologized if I did something wrong.
Lastly, it is mandatory that parent have discipline on their children. According to a research, many criminals who have done unspeakable crimes did not learn any disciplines when they were young. In my case, my parents taught me manners and the basic disciplines for life, and I have been known as a polite and good-mannered boy.
In conclusion, there are many parents nowadays, and not every parent can be called a good one. People choose many qualities for being a good parent. Among them, I personally choose love, responsibility, and discipline as the most important factors of being a good parent. | |
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