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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to complain in person than in writing. Use specific reasons and exmaples to support your answer. | |
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It is often said that complaining in writing is far less effective than doing in person. Some people may be opposed to this statement because writing reduces pressure to meet somebody face-to-face. However, I think that it is much better to express my complains directly. This is because, I cannot perfectly convey my thinking and cannot get instant answer with writing. :This is because sending letter of complaint cannot perfectly convey my thinking and cannot get an immediate response.
First of all, writing is a very limited way to communicate. One significant reason is that writing prevents people from using other methods of representation, such as facial expressions, voice tones, and gestures, which play a significant role in communication. For example, I had some quarrels with my best friend because of trivial problems. Since I wanted to get along with her again, I tried to solve problems by telling her about how I felt. each person's complains. However, when I sent a text message which includesed my complains, she became to be more unpleasant because she cannot could not understand my true intent with only short message. If I had met her in person and had informed revealed my true heart with various methods, I could have mingled with her.(OR: I could still be hanging out with her.)
The other reason why I prefer complaining in person than in writing is that writing is too time-consuming. This is because, I cannot get an immediate answer and then have to wait until the opposite person sends me an answer. For instance, when I was a sophomore at university, I got C grade C in management class. Since I could not understand(OR: accept) my grade, I visited my professor, and immediately got to know there were some mistakes in the marking process. On the other hand, when I sent an e-mail to the other professor with the same problem, I could not get an instant answer. So I have had to log-in to my mail several times one a day to check whether he gave me a reply. It really made me irritate irritated me and took away my time.
On the whole, complaining in person is much more effective because we can convey our ideas powerfully and save time by getting prompt reply. On top of that, in modern society, it definitely becomes to be more important to express my opinion directly. expressing our opinions directly is becoming more and more important. By doing so, we can socialize ourselves more well better. | |
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