■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Young people enjoy life more than older people. agree or disagree? | |
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I agree on that young people enjoy life more than older people do. We can usually see old people who are not happy or who do not come out of their houses. On the other hand we meet pyoung people all around the streat smiling and laughing enjoying their lives. Then what could be the reason for this phenomenon?
First of all, the reason why old people can not enjoy their lives is that they are too conventional compared to the young people. They are to afraid to open their minds to what exists in the outer world. We can see many senior citizens who always sticks to traditions. They dont now how to perceive other aspects of their culture or other new traditions. Because of this attitude they become more alone within the changing world. On the other hand young people have no fear no interjecting with other cultures.
Secondly, they have mental and physical pain that follows their age. As they age their body ages as well as their mind. Even if they want to be active or happy there are cases where their physical or mental status does not follow. The physical pain consequently leads to stress, and stress leads to misery which gradually causes more pain. As a result they start avoiding every activity they meet our every contanct they can get. They start getting seperated form the world. Opposite from the old, we can see that young people have no penalties in activities that might need physical movement.
We can see that the young people enjoy their lives more than older people is that old people have more lack in physical or mental ability. So young people have more chance in being happy then older people do. | |
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