Many people have different tastes and opinions about siblings,/끊고, While one some people prefer to live with by theirselves, the others people prefer to live with their brothers or sisters . As for me, i would like to live with my brother or sister because, though living with my sibling might be annoying, i'm sure living with sibling grant many advantage than living without sibling.
living보다는 문제에 제시한것 처럼 growing up..을 쓰는게 더 나을것 같네요.
The most important fact reason why living with sibling is benefit beneficial is, having sibling may bring good social relationship( ~helps children to build good social relationship with others in a society). The 2006 statstics said 1000 teenagers who have no brother or sister are having problem for social relationship because they didn't have chance to learn how to make the relationship( how to socialize with others) in the house with their sibling. However, another 1000 teenagers who have at least one sibling are barely having problem for relationship. That is, the statistics prove having sibling is major factor for making relationship.
relationship을 함부로 떵하니 이것만 쓰시지 마시구 어떤 relationship인지 specify해주시든가,
다른 phrase로 쓰시던가 하시는게 좋을것 같네요.
The other reason is, sibling is the best friend for everybody. Frankly, many teenagers tend to be reluctant to say their private serious problem to their friends(reluctant to talk about their private problems with their friends, even close friends) because their friend might disclose their private to others friend. However, many teenagers like to say their problem to their sibling because they know their brother or sister would not uncover their problem to anybody because they are family and they are saving each others credit by growing up together.(한문장안에 because가 2번이나 들어갔죠, 끊어주던가
다른 말로 바꾸던가) So, having sibling is good for solving or lessing their deep problem.
say 보다는 talk가 더 낫겠죠.
The final one is, sibling may become a great tutor or teacher. As a my experience, my sister was my great helper for me during my final exam. When i found difficult problem, my sister used to help me out. Even though my sister sometimes made a mistake, it was great aid for me because we could put our brain together to solve for the problem, and it usually got done pretty quickly. Just like that, the siblings may become very close and useful tutor.
As you see, having sibling has many beneficial benefits . I already know some of people might complain about their sibling because having sibling may cause petty fighting. However, if you see futher, you would prefer to live with your brother or sister because when you see futher, you could see how great having sibling in your life. if you see further, when you see further이거 2번쓰신 이유는?
benefit 이랑 beneficial이랑 헷갈리신거 같네요 ^^
benefit 은 noun beneficial은 adjective..
그래머와 단어선택이 약하셔요. 연습하셔야 되겠구요.^^
굳렄.
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