■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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In a modern society, people cannot imagine life without automobiles and it is true that the advent of automobile made life more convenient. However, I strongly believe that cars caused some significant problems such as environmental destruction and extravagant development of cities.
Most significant side effect of cars is the production of environmental pollutions. Automobiles utilize fossil fuels and after burning of fossil fules, many kinds of gases inculding carbon dioxide are emiited from automobiles. Many scientists revealed that the main cause of glabal warming is huge amount of dioxide. This green house gas grasp the heat released from the Earth and is increasing the average temperature of the Earth. As the name indicated, global warming is damaging the whole world including areas where automobiles do not exist. In artic regions, for example, polar bears living on ice lost their habitats because increased ground temperature is melting tremendous amount of ice burgs in this territory. Also, gases emitted from cars polluted the air seriously and many people living in cities suffer from respiratory diseases such as asthma. Many doctors warn them that they have to avoid the contact with polluted air. Like this, environmental pollutions caused by cars are serious and even life-threatening.
It is also considerable that the invention of a car caused imbalance between cities and rural areas. After automobiles were invented, they sped up the industrialization of cities and became most popular means of traffic. Since many people could commute from the outside of cities to city centers by driving a car, people left country sides and population is concentrated on cities. Imbalance between cities and country sides led several social problems. For example, as cities are overpopulated, people have difficulties to find a job and they suffer from terrible traffic jams. At the same time, since more and more people are leaving the rural areas, there is always lack of labor and people suffer from lack of social facilites in the country sides.
In conclusion, I firmly believe cars caused environmental pollutions and over-development of cities caused and these problems are damaging the worlds. This is why many cities insprire people to ride a bicycle and many companies try to develop novel cars using alternative energy.
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