■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : It is better to live in one city or town than to move from one place to another. | |
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Nowadays, a number of people prefer to move from on place to another than to live in one city or town.
The reason why people prefer to do this is very simple. it can provide a lot of experience.
However, in my opinion, it can be very dangerous .People who move from on place to another have difficulty in living new environment. and living in one city have advantages for saving time and money
First of all, I think it is very difficult anyone who move from on place to another.
Suppose that if you were move one place that there is no freinds, no neighbors, no pets and so on.
Can you imagine this situation? it wiil be very terrible to you and you won't accept this situation.
if i were in your shoes, i won't accept this ,too.
On the top of that, living in one city or town can be helpful to save time and money.
This is because, it can be very time-consuming to move from on place to another.If you have enough time , it doesn't matter. but these days, it can be problem.
so it is better to live in one place long than move many places.
To sum up, there is a two reasons why i support living in one city or town. first it is more valuable to live in one city. and living in one city can save time and money.
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