Some people might say that people can get better knowledge outside of school than in school, (콤마 찍어주세요~!) because going on a trip or watching TV can give students lots of knowledge. However, I’m convinced that people gain better knowledge in school. There are two reasons for why I feel this; One reason for my argument is that first, there are a lot of teachers in school, in addition, . Another reason is that schools have good provide the better environment to study.
(잘 써주셨어요^^ 선생님이 많다고 하는것 보다는, 많은 선생님들이 보다 더 accurate 하고 proved 된 사실, 그리고 knowledge 를 provide 해준다. 라고 쓰는것이 좋겠네요^^. 길게 쓰실 필요는 없어요^^!)
First of all, there are a lot of teachers in school. Schools have every subject teachers for every single subject, (such as math, science, history and literature teacher.) Therefore, people who have a question always can always ask teachers what they know. For example, when I study, I can’t solve a question. However, I need not to be worried do not need to worry about this, (콤마 주의하세요~!) because in school, there are many teachers. If I ask questions, this problem to teachers, they teach me easily and kindly. As a result, a lot of teachers help people to students easily gain knowledge easily.
(question 을 묻고 답하는 예제를 들때, 쉬운 예제는 경험으로 드는것이 가장 convincing 하고 직접적으로 느껴집니다^^. 예를들어, 내가 어떤 질문을 계속 남겨놓고 있었는데, 여러사람에게 물어봤을때도 잘 몰랐던 질문을 학교 선생님은 정확히 설명해주셨다. 이런식으로, 쉽고 간단하지만 convincing 하도록 써주세요~^^)
Moreover, schools have good environment place to study such as library and computer room. It is easy to get knowledge because in school, library has the school libraries have all kinds of books. Hence, if someone has some people have a question, they can find knowledge by borrow (borrowing) the books related to the question. Also, they can use computer room in school. Computer makes us get information quick and fast. quickly (and can print something.) So if I only just click the mouse, I can gain knowledge that I want to know. Therefore, this useful environment gives people to help people gain knowledge easily.
(예제는 좀 직접적이게 써주세요~^^.
예를들어, 학교의 calm 하고 energetic 하고, quite? 한 atmosphere 는 공부에 concentrate 하는데에 큰 도움이 된다. exam 이 있었을때 공부하러 갔었는데... 이렇게 좀.. 비교를 써주세요..^^)
In conclusion, I agree with this opinion that people gain better knowledge in school on account of the reason that I mentioned above; there are a lot of teachers in school and schools have good environment to study. |