■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer
Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academicsubjects than to
specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the society being spcified, many people might think the professional and deep knowledge is important. However, I strongly agree with the argument that having large knowledge in variety learning subject is better than to professionalize in one particular subject.
To start with, the variety knowledge can have more chance to get a job after graduate from school. A person with a broad knowledge will be able to get a deeper knowledge by some effect for being specified, and also can gain enormous effect from the wide knowledge he has alredy. In short, a man with a variety information has manyportentials. For an example of this, my cousin has massive knowledges because of his many travels and readings, but he did not majored in one particular subject.That was his parents` worry. However after he graduated from his high school, he had his certain purpose and majored management in the university. He could get stupendous knowledges of management by the colossal things he attained from his experiences. He became a successful leader in a group. By this, I felt the importance of large knowledge from experiences.
Futhermore, know many things is good for one`s social activities. In prosent, relationship with other people is very important in one`s life. Extensive knowledges can make others interesting and surprisingly. Accordingly, many informations can be so helpful in the social activities. For an example of this, my uncle is a normal man who goes to a normalcompany. However he has vast knowledges in his brain, even though he did not majored profoundly in one subject. Because of his fabulous knowledges, many people likes to talk with him. I am so proud of him.
To summarize, by the reasons I mentioned above, I totally agree with the argument that having massive knowledges in many academic fields is better than major in only one part of learning. Given the choice between broad knowledges, I will surely choose the variety knowledge.
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