Every person wants success in life. It can be man's most prevailed desire regardless of race and nationality. Wherever you go, nowadays, people all have the equation: top colleges and universities equals to success in life. Top colleges and universities provide high quality education and social activities giving advantages towards success but, I disagree with the statement that getting a university education is the most important factor for success in a life. There are two reasons why for to support my opinions / why I stick to my position.
First of all, the majority of the population are getting university education unlike before. In the past, , before where not many people had the chance to go to university.
But, it is ingenious creativity and determination that determines success in life.
it is 형용사 that 주어 + 동사 형태가 되어야합니다. 위의 경우 that은 주격관계 대명사가 되는데 그렇게 되면 가주어 it의 진주어가 없는 모양이 됩니다.
university education is required to develop creativity and ingenious skills, so it results in success
In other words, you have to think in different ways and have the courage to do it. For example, Steve Jobs didn't graduate from university. In fact, he dropped out (of university.) was a drop-out. But with his creativity and determination to do what he likes most made him of what is today.
with his creativity and determination, he made his life successful. 과 같은 형식으로 마무리 해야합니다.
If he had simply went through been granted a his degree, Apple wouldn't exist now. have existed. Another example would be Bill Gates. He dropped out of a university too. too was a university drop out. Though he can have a good life through a degree in Harvard, he followed his creativity for software and had the determination to give up one of the best schools in the world. If he didn't make had not made that decision then, we couldn't have amazing software in our computer.
Even though he did not get a unversity degree (and gave up one of the best schools in the world), he improved his creativity for software and made a success in his life.
Second, the courage of never fearing failure is another key source of success. If you fail a task, you have to learn from it. Fearing failure only hinders oneself to proceed people from proceeding forwards. For instance, many CEO's have all agreed that failure is a must essential for success because failure gives an opportunity to learn one's defects and leads to enhance the weakness. But, fearing it the fear does not make a person not progress. There are no fresh ideas and attempts because of the thought of failure. The result would be constant stagnancy. One cannot expect success from that kind of attitude.
another key of success is the courage not to fear failure.
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In conclusion, getting a university education does gives advantages for success but it doesn't guarantee success. Rather the creativity, determination, and the courage to never fear failure would more significant for success in life.
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