As the galloping technology is developing fast, it brings about more and more benefits to our society. One of the most innovative inventions should be our vehicles. This kind of invention has changed our life very much. So I totally disagree with the statement which believes that the number of cars would reduce later. There are a couple of reasons to name.
1. galloping 과 developing fast 는 비슷한 의미의 반복이니 하나는 빼주시는 것이 깔끔한 글이 됩니다.
ex. Due to the galloping development of technology
First of all, cars make our life convenient. Thanks to cars, we don't have to waste much time when we are heading for somewhere. They shortened the (length of) time we have to spend. They enable us to do other things or work in our spare time, which makes everything efficient and effective. For example, in old days, when people wanted to make contact with relatives or friends living far away from them, they had to make phone calls or send letters. However, vehicles enabled us to do more direct and immediate communication. We just need to get in the car and visit people we want to meet. So we can see that cars not only give us convenience, but also improve our interpersonal communication with others.
In addition, people will not stop buying cars because car is a symbol of richness in society. There are all kinds of cars range from compact small cars to luxurious and expensive cars such as Bentz. Each kind of cars stands for a certain social status and people tend tent to climb up to (be) upper class, which is known as social mobility. A middle class family might own a cheap van while a millionaire drives Audi. As the living conditions of people are getting better (get better and better), they will have enough money to afford expensive cars. Furthermore, there 1. always are many new cars coming out which stimulate the customers to buy. In other words, the desire of people who want to own better cars will not allow vehicles to disappear.
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In conclusion, it is impossible to see the reduction of car population. Cars make our life convenient and efficient and people will refuse not to drive on the grounds of their desire to have a better life.
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