■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :if you have to discuss something upsetting or controversial, it is better to use e-mail or texting than to use the telephone or voice mail. | |
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The rapid development of technology has come to encompass every single aspect of our society. Specifically, when it comes to discussion, technologies are utilized as a means to perform effective communication among people. Texting and using telephones are the two representative means of communication, having particular advantages, respectively. From my perspective, I would use e-mail or texting when discussing something upsetting with no doubt. First, using e-mail or texting enables people to do better logical presentation in controversy. Also, they are less likely to engender misunderstanding among people.
Most conspicuously, people can perform effective communication rooted from logical format of writing. When using telephone or voice mail, the interaction between people is instant that people likely to mess up everything when starting to get frustrated. This frustration may lead to failure in communication, depriving of opportunities to talk about the initial intention of speaker. However, when we are in discussion, it is not one's ability to overcome frustration that we value but it is people's critical opinions toward given topics. Thus, it is e-mail or texting that must be used when people have to argue something. Specifically, this way of communication has particular advantages such as spending relatively large amount of time to contemplate on how to achieve more effective interaction. Additionally, mistakes such as making typos is not problematic because people tend to appreciate the value of revision work when working in e-mail or texting.
Secondly, engendering misunderstanding will be lessened with the use of e-mail or texting. There are other factors controlling the efficient communication among people. Particularly, a person's voice may be a crucial factor that can mess up everything in spite of perfect logical presentation from speaker. That is because people's feelings toward a topic can be visualized as they speak. For example, people are having exuberant discussion and one person starts to murmur as he speaks. No matter what content may be, his argument will not be persuasive as no sign of confidence is shown. On the other hand, person's voice can not be heard when using e-mail or texting. Their arguments can not be read in biased views from unintended disturbing factors. Therefore, using e-mail or texting is a preferable method in discussion.
In brief, sometimes using voice mail may come into huge effect as it saves large amount of time in communication and can show familiarity toward counterparts. However, discussion should be proceeded in more formal and serious manner, highlighting the importance of 'more effective' means of communication. | |
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