It has been an issue whether (or not) grades encourage students to stay focused on study. Since having good marks makrs in school is an essentinal portion for most of students, it It becomes significant for them to (make sure that students) get high grades (good marks) on the test. I feel 1. that grades motivate students to study even harder and make competition stronger it also makes strong competition among them many students.
*good marks 의 반복을 피하기 위해서 high grades 로 바꿔보았습니다.
1. that 절 안에 성적이 미치는 영향에 대해서 말하고 있는데요.. 두 개의 동사, motivate 와 make 는 and 로 연결되는 동사로 사용되었기 때문에 같은 동사원형의 형태로 써주어야 합니다.
To begin with, getting grades could motivate students to study harder than then ever. The rationale reason behind this is that most students tend to regret that they didn't do their best after they got the first results about their first grades as a result of not trying enough to study hard. This would encourage students to study harder to get better grades on the next exam. For instance, when When I was a junior in high High school, I spent most of the time on playing game or hanging out with friends rather than concentrating on study. After taking the first exam, I was shocked by getting a poor grade, which made me realize how much time I had been wasted for unnecessary stuff. I did not want to regret for about having a poor grade once again and I put much more effort on study to get a better grade on the next exam.
On top of that, grades make strong competition between many students. This is because students want to get better marks than any other students so that they feel confident in about themselves. To illustrate, I had a friend who usually got worse grade than I did. I made fun of his poor grades once in a while. 1. Eventually, he got pissed off about it and decided to study stduy hard to beat my grades up. On the final exam, he got a better grade than me and he was so proud of it. After that happend, I could not make brag of about my grades in front of him. This example shows why strong competition among students encourages them to stay focus on study.
1. piss off 는 구어체에서 더 많이 사용되는 말입니다. Eventually, he, disappointed with his grades, decided to study hard~
In short, Having marks from the test definitely could encourage students to study hard. Ultimately, it It will not only help students to get better grades, but also cause a positive results from the competition. |