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There is an argument concerning whether children should grow up in the country side or in a big city. Although it is true that Children can learn more information in the big city, I believe that Living in a country side is more helpful for children. In this essay I will present briefly two reasons to support my idea.
Most of all, living in the country side is good for health. a good example can be found in the situation in which the environment is much better than urban’s environment. therefor children can live in the clean atmospheres. These atmospheres include clean air, transparent water and good earth. What is more is that They can exercise naturally. Personally, when I was young I lived with my grandmother. At that time the house is located in countryside. so I could run in the all of the town freely. This makes my health stronger that before. Hence, children can grow up healthier in the countryside.
Another reason for my idea is that children can be educated, which urban area can’t give. To exemplify this, children can learn agriculture. For example, they can have small farm by themselves with the parents’ help and give the fertilizer to their farm. As a result, They can learn how important the nature is. In similar manner, they can learn how to live together. It is hard to learn community in urban area. in contrast to the urban area, helping each other is very common situation in countryside. Therefore, it is possible to teach children many of lesson
In summary, I agree with the statement that It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city, on account of the reasons that I mentioned above: not only does the life in countryside is good for health, but it also will provide alive education.
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