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There is an argument over whether today, it is easier to become an educated person than in the past or not. Some people think that the generation does not affect the education of people. I, however, believe that person can be more educated easily than before. My view can be greatly substantiated by the reasons below.
First, recently, people have a lot of chances to get information. By accessing to the internet, person people get many articles and materials. and In addition, there are variable books in a number of library. For example, there is only 1 library in the South Korea in 1960s. However, more than 100 libraries are in Korea now. This means Koreans can get books more easily. The person who did not lived in capital city of Korea did not have chance to go to the library and read many books in the past. However, the person who lives in country side also can read books the library near his home now. (결론을 지어주세요. 그래서 이제는 더욱 더 많은 정보를 얻게되므로 예전보다 더 교육을 받을 수가 있다라고요)
Secondly, almost everyone can learn and study in school nowadays. Every person has to go to school as a because of the government's policy. The elementary school and middle school is obligatory education in Korea and 98% middle school students go to high school after graduate graduating middle school in South Korea now. On the contrary, those who are more than 80 years old Koreans did not graduate elementary school even. For example, my grandparents did not have the chance to (공부를 안했다라기보다는 공부를 할 기회가 없었다가 좋겠죠?) study in school and my parents graduated university. And I will study master’s degree after graduating graduate the university. This is because many people have college diploma so it is not special advantage for getting a job nowadays. (이렇게 결론짓기전에 왜 시간이 흐를수록 교육을 더받을 기회가 있었는지에 대해서 설명해줄 필요가 있다고 생각하네요.) Thus, as time goes by, more people have the chances to be educated. As many people are educated for a long time, as time goes on. (시간이 갈수록 더 많은 사람들이 오랜 교육을 받는다)
In conclusion, a lot of chance to accessing reading materials and going to school make the person can be easily educated person now than the past. For these reasons, I think that those who living nowadays are more easily become to educated person than before.
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