■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : HACKERS TOEFL ACTUAL TEST ACTUAL TEST 10 |
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▶ Your Answer :
The lecturer argues that the assertion about tamarisk beetle not being suitable to eradicate tamarisk trees is exaggerated. This contradicts the reading passage's claim that tamarisk beetle (??? 쓰다 마신 건가요?) First, the lecturer points out that it is not true that this beetle is impossible to control its spread. Since tamarisk beetle have only one source of food which is tamarisk tree, it will die off if there is no tamarisk tree. Also it has much of its natural predators so the population size can be controlled. This cast doubt on the reading passage's claim that the spread of its population is impossible. Next, the lecturer maintains that even if it takes a long time for tamarisk beetle to kill the tree it can effect the tree's water consumption immediately. The tamarisk beetle eat all the tree leaves in a very short time which will effect the tree to consume less water due to the fact that lots of leaves will require water but in opposite it won't. This strongly challenges the reading passage's claim that tamarisk tree will make use of all the available water until it is killed completely. Finally, the lecturer explains that wildfire is not all severe. It is true that these tamarisk tree debris are really flammable. However, the government can manage to clear the debris of its dried woods and it has been done before. This counters the reading passage's claim that the tamarisk beetle will increase the danger of wildfire. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼을 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. it's 와 its에는 엄연한 차이가 있습니다.
it's = it is
its = it의 소유격
반드시 잘 구별해주셔야합니다. 헷갈리시면 안 돼요!
3. 문장의 길이가 전체적으로 다 긴 느낌입니다. 문장을 짧고 간결하게 하는 습관을 들여주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
(and으로 연결 시키는 부분을 다 온점으로 끝내주시고 새로운 문장을 시작해보세요)
4. 전체적으로 분량이 적습니다. detail이 상당히 부족합니다. evidence를 최대한 많이 가져오시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
바디가 3-4문장밖에 안 됩니다. 적어도 6문장 이상은 되어야 합니다.
인트로덕션도 지금 쓰다 마신 것 같은데 적어도 3문장은 써주셔야 합니다.
5. in comparison, compared to ~~~, on the other hand와 같은 반전을 주는 연결어를 많이 사용해주세요.
(reading과 listening의 대비)
수고하셨습니다. *^^*