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Some people think that nowadays people more feel happy and satisfied today than people were in past. I fully agree with this statement for two reasons. Because of our society is obsessed conscious of the way other people are looking at one. And a new technology of development provides too much information to people. To begin with, people always care about other’s view than in the past. This is because that nowadays people tend to notice other people’s appearance easily. This view shows why people are obsessed their looking. Nowadays people’s look is important that because of show people’s state and what they have possession. I think that is most important part of this society, but it has a bad effect. People are used to judging themselves just a person’s look. Therefore, we need to look deep into ourselves but they did not. For example, many people think a person like a loser, but a person becomes a successful person. This example shows this problem that the most people too much focus a person’s appearance, so they did not recognize the person’s inner characters. In the past have the same situation, but I think this situation more deepen than past. Furthermore, a new technology of development made a lot of sns(social network service). That most people use it boasts their wealth. This causes people feel a sense of loss. My personal experience can be used to prove my point. For instead, when I saw the posting that my friend Pari trip. At this moments I felt losing something inside of mine, because I always wanted to go Paris, but I could not. It made people compare other person’s; this is decreasing our life’s quality. This example makes sure that sns cannot make people feel satisfied their life than the past.
To sum up, people feel unhappy and dissatisfied today than past. Frist, people just look the people’s appearance in order to judge themselves, secondly, sns make to compare other
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