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It is debatable whether watching movies
that teach something about life is better than movies tthat are entertaining. entertainment movies. This is an
intriguing question because opinions concerning this issue can be different
depending on individual perspectives. In my opinion, however, I agree support (동사를 반복시키지 마시고 둘 중 하나를 골라서 쓰세요)
that watching educational movies is
better than watching entertainment movies.
Frist of all, people can broaden their
perspectives by watching movies that they people can learn something from it. It
exposes them to different lifestyles, customs and cultures. Such exposure is
likely to help them acknowledge that different values exist, understand this the
diversity and be ultimately comfortable with it. For example, Wwhen I was
younger, I didn't have any experrience with had not experienced other cultures, especially religious, as well as and I also had no experience with
met people from different countries. Therefore, I could not never understand other
cultures, lifestyles and perspectives. By the way, when I was in high school,
my friend recommended me to watch foreign documentary movies such as "Who
is Alhambra". (내용은 이해가 가지만 너무 전개가 급작스러운 면이 있어요) It was very interesting because it shows showed me a lot of new
things. Thanks to the movie, I gained a great amount of common sense and deep
understanding of the Muslim culture/lifestyle. Afterwards, when I met my Muslim friend 'Muhammad' in
university, I could get along with him well and accept his own religious religion and
culture because I fully understood Muslim. (다큐멘터리 하나를 봐서 무슬림 문화를 완전히 이해한다는 것은 너무 급작스러운것 같아요) Through this experience, I realized
that if I enjoyed only entertaining movies, I could never step out of narrow
views.
Second, watching movies that give lessons is beneficial
for students because it accompanies an important educational process. To be
specific, it creates opportunities for students to get comprehension of a
variety of issues, and cultures from the movies. As a result, this allows students to stay
ahead and attain personal growth. To illustrate, a study was conducted by the
Korean Education Board to determine whether the movies that teach something
about life could affect student education. There were two groups monitored. The
first group was formed of people who watch educational movies regularly. They
were asked to take tests to measure their level of academic performances. The
other group consisted of people who watch entertainment movies and were given
the same direction. The researchers compared the outcomes and recorded that the
former group was able to attain better high scores than the latter. The reason
was that the students of the former group learned a wide range/variety? of issues, new high
advanced/sophisticated vocabularies, and also valuable lessons that they have never could not get got from
entertainment movies.
In
conclusion, I firmly believe that movies that teach something about life are
more helpful than entertainment movies. All things considered, It is my belief
that my argument regarding this topic can be effectively and precisely
delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
총점: 27~28 총평을 하자면 영어를 굉장히 유창하게 구사하시고 내용도 굉장히 설득력 있게 잘 쓰신 것 같아요. 다만 몇몇 부분에서 전개가 너무 급작스러워서 부자연스러운 면이 있었습니다.그리고 문법적인 오류(특히 대구)만 신경쓰시면 충분히 만점을 노려보실 만할 것 같아요. 수고많으셨습니다.
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