■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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Some people think that the government should invest in increasing number of teachers or make a pre-school. However, I have a different idea of it. I believe invest in the training of teacher is the best way for the school. First of all, the trained teacher is the most important factor to increase the quality of the lesson. Secondly, it is the most proper way to students' mature rather than other methods. Let me explain why I think so.
To begin with, developing the teacher's performance is the most effective way to improve the quality of the class. Since recent society gradually requires more high qualified-knowledge and experts skills, in order to satisfy this needs, teachers should offer students to more highly qualified knowledge. For instance, according to the research from the University of Maryland, most influential factor for student's academic accomplishment and the employment rate is the overall abilities of the teacher including information and academic knowledge what they offered toward the students. 80% of the students responded teacher's ability is the most crucial factor for their class. On the other hand, regardless of the number of students and whether or not they have free schools, their achievements have not increased unless they are provided high-quality knowledge.
On top of that, the trained teachers are most important for students growth. The foremost objective of the school is helping their growth as the proper person socially. Also, the role of the teacher in shaping the student's personalities is very crucial.
For example, the teacher should provide numerous lessons with their student for their growth. this lecture is not only confined to academic fields but also philosophy and moral and social skill and so on. Hence, the government should invest toward the teacher to develop their performance in various aspects themselves. However, even the relying on the different methods like to build a pre-school or modify the extent of classes could not satisfy these aspects. Also, unlike other ways, because setting up and distributing a teacher-learning course requires not only economic but institutional help, hence it needs the power of the government rather than individuals.
To sum up, training teachers can provide students with various aspect of knowledge for their mature and effective way to increase the student's academic achievement.
In this regard, I strongly agree that government should invest in training teacher rather than free-school and modification of number the student in each class.