Do you agree or disagree with the fallowing statement? Friends are the most important influence on young adults. |
It is said that at the stage of young adult, humans reach to their prime of emotionally sensitive state. This is because in this state they are physically evolved as much enough as grown ups, but having trouble with yet-unorganized emotion. Therefore, researchers say young adults at this stage tend to adhere with others, mostly friends, and feel comfortable when forming their own group. In my opinion, I do agree with the fallowing statement ‘friends are the most important influence on young adults with my two supporting reasons. First, as mentioned at the top, young adults tend to assimilate themselves together, in vague concerns of uncertainty of their immature identities while their bodies are fully grown up. Therefore they seek for people who understand them and amiable to integrate without uncomfortable dispute. In this case, people who fit most perfectly to the young adults’ requirement are most likely their peers sharing similar symptoms with them. This is the first reason why I treat friends during juvenile age important. They need some one to listen to their sufferings, they want to counsel other friends’ sufferings, they desire for outlets to emit mental stresses and disbelief. Encountering similar situations might work as a plus ingredient to the juveniles to feel assimilated. Second, the fact that young adults’ colleagues are at their similar age, they know their anxieties have already been through or are now on the colleagues, it makes the juvenile more approachable with their concerns, feel more relaxed and emotionally tranquil in avoid of implicit burdens they feel to their parents or older brothers or sisters. Friends or school peers in similar generation and point of view, aid juveniles to resolve their problems more sincerely whereas parents in different ages can not fill up the great generation hole between their children. In conclusion, I think having friends in young adult phase is very important in reason of comfortable approach to their anxieties, therefore I strongly agree with the fallowing statement ‘friends are the most important influence on young adults.’
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