It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. |
When it comes to the matter of the education of children, parents often get into the struggle whether to move out to the countryside, or oppositely move in to the urban area. Based on my experience, I had the opportunity to live both urban and rural areas, both has merits and demerits. However, if I were to choose between the two, I would have no doubt to choose the countryside. I could not miss the benefits that my children will get from the healthier environment, and exclusive experiences only gained through the nature. The first and the most important advantage of life in the countryside is the environment. As the world is becoming more crowded and thus pollution being the serious topic, such environmental benefits should be more concerned. Children growing up in the urban areas cannot avoid the exposure to the various types of pollution, such as air, water, noise, etc. In contrast, children are relatively safe from pollution, and diseases derived from pollution, ensuring a healthy, well-being life in the countryside. In talking the benefits of living in the countryside, you cannot miss the advantages the children will get from the live education. Children in the countryside are surrounded by pure and untouched nature. It is the exclusive place for the study of the nature. As children in the urban areas meet frogs only in the pictures in a boring science book, children in the countryside can actually meet them, touch them, and experience them. It is also economically beneficial, because children in the city often visit the countryside for this live experience, and normally in large expenses. Children in the countryside not only obtain indirect knowledge through books, but also have opportunities to actually apply and experience the things they’ve learned from the book. To summarize, I highly recommend you to live out in the countryside, if you are concerning the raising of your children. You can promise your children’s health, as well as giving the children more vivid and realistic education. Commute would not be a big deal then. |
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