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Most of people believe that it is better for universities to spend their funds at improving students' knowledge by supporting huge amount of money on their libraries at the expense of sports activities. However, I definitely believe that universities should spend the same amount of money on athletic department. The rationale behind this is that sports strenghten students' body and teach them social skills.
To begin with, sports activities improve students' physical health. This is largely because sports, such as cycling, swimming, marathon and basketball, allow student to use their muscles which they don't use at usual. Also, by running and jumping they can have strong bones. To illustrate this point, my sister hated to move or excersice when she was in high school, she was always stuck to the computer and never came out the house to work out. Inevitably, she suffered from obesity as a result of her sedentary life. However, she began to lose considerable weight right after she started jogging every morning, as her doctor suggested. As this shows, students can have their physical condition much better with sports activities.
On top of that, students can learn a valuable lesson through sports. Since sports include a lot of team activities such as soccer, football, and volleyball, sports teach students how to work nicely with others and the importance of cooperation. For example, when I was in junior high school, I was in the school's soccer team and we had a match with neighbor school. At the first half, I so selfish that I didn't even pass the ball to other colleagues, and was only eager to score a goal by myself. As a result, we were losing one point behind at the end of the first half. Finally, I became to regret my behavior and apologized to my team. And as the second half began, We really tried our best to win that game, by passing and making space for colleagues. Surprisingly, we scored two goals at the second half and we won the game. And by that experience I learn that we need coorporation with each other necessarily to gain the victory.
As the proverb "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy" goes, the universities should encourage their students to do sports activities by supporting financially. This is because it help students to promote their physical and mental health.
꼴랑 이거쓰는데 한 시간이나 걸렸어요 ㅜㅜ 중간에 너무 안써져서 아이디어는 해커스책에서 빌려왔는데도 너무 어렵네요ㅜㅜ 시험이 낼모렌데 이정도 쓰면(물론 시간 오바했지만) 점수 어느정도 나올까요?ㅜㅜ logic이 너무 떨어지는것 같기도 하고ㅜ |