■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : What do you think about democracy country or communism country? Which is better? Use reason and specific example to suggest your answer. | |
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I think democracy is better than communism.
Because if our country does the communism, our country will purish.
The president will make our life like animals.
The president will steal our money, ground and work definitely.
And he/she wants to make money, and make many cities in the locality.
Also he will destroys the locality and makes cities.
But if our country does the democracy, we can live happily.
The president helps us, and makes many welfare facilities.
He/She can give the money for poor people, and handicapped people.
He/She will makes us comfortably.
He/She won't destroys the locality.
Instead, he/she will helps the locality.
In Korea, South Korea is democracy.
But North Korea is communism. So they're very stiff.
So I think democracy is better than communism.
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