Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer |
Travel is full of new events, people, sceneries, and experience. That is why people are so excited about traveling. However, a traveler cannot miss a tour in the museum of the place they are visiting. Visiting museums is highly recommended for travelers for two reasons: It is the archive of knowledge and history, and by visiting museums you get to have a more wide, open perspective about the world. A museum is an archive of knowledge and history. Some museums hold historical materials that are better worth watching with bare eyes than knowing through photographs or on books. For example, we see the Mona Lisa thousands of thousand times, but many people agree that it is better see the original copy placed in the museum of Luvre, Paris. Also, some museums contain materials that are rare or exclusive. For example, you can meet the original, epic sized spacecrafts that retired from NASA, only in the space museum of Washington D.C. Visiting museums is highly recommended for that we can widen our view of the world. For example, China is well known for its cultural power via enormous amount of historic materials displayed in museums all over the world. If you visit the Museum of Great Britain, you can admire at the collection of the materials, as well as the power of Britain in the imperialism era, when Britain invaded and plundered thing that held historical values. |
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