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Nowadays, due to rapid development of technology, the society changes continuously. Thus, some people insist that teachers should be reeducated every five years in order to keep up with the times. I think this insistence quite makes sense and reasonable. Teachers should be reeducated for the sake of them and their students.
First of all, if teachers are reeducated, they can broaden and deepen their teaching skill. The teaching method keeps changing and evolving unceasingly, so there can be many good new ways of effective teaching that have developed after teachers graduate from their educational universities. The reeducation program for teachers can provide teachers with the latest, best teaching methods. If teachers learn these brand-new methods, teachers >> they will gain more confidence in their teaching and consequently, students can receive better education than before.
Another important reason why teachers should be reeducated in every five years is that teachers should keep up with not only the times but also with students. Many of 생략 problems between teachers and students arise from lack of understanding each other. This is largely due to their age difference, in other words, generation gap. If the reeducation program gives teachers specific analysis and information about the student's generation, teachers can be knowledgeable about their students and they will understand their students more. This better understanding about students will provide harmonious classroom atmosphere that eventually fosters student's academic performance.
In conclusion, it is desirable to teachers to be reeducated in every five years because the reeducation program will provides teachers about latest teaching information and profound understanding of their students. By attending the reeducation course in every five year, teachers can be far better teachers. They will teach students with strong confidence and well-developed teaching skills. Accordingly, the academic performance of students will significantly rise. Therefore, I firmly agree with the statement.
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