[topic] : 대학 재정을 physical activities faculities에 투자하는 것이 옳은가 그렇지 않은가?
* 글쓰는 것은 국문이든 영문이든 정말 어렵습니다. 집중적으로 준비할 수 없는 여건에 있는지라, 조금씩 지쳐가는 것을 느끼네요.
* 이야기를 충분하지만 간략하게 쓰는 실력이 부족하다고 생각합니다. 장황하게 쓰는 경향이 있고 문법과 어휘력 또한 상당하지 않은지라 같은 내용을 비슷한 구조로 유사한 어휘를 이용하는 우를 범하고 있습니다.
* 연습이 완벽을 만든다하지만, 그렇지 못한 여건에 있는 저에게 토플 정복은 만리장성만큼 길고 높습니다.
따끔한 지적 부탁드립니다.
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Let’s think about the reason why the people in the world can enjoy their convenient life. It is because that the scientists have studied about the fundamental science matters for an ivory tower in universities. In addition, the universities have encouraged students to attain their gorgeous achievement for the mankind as well as supporting them in many scholarly ways such as laboratory, library and so on. So, many people think that the purpose of the university is just for development and research of knowledge. I agree with the common thought, but I want to argue that the reason of university is not only the pursuit of learning but also education for a whole man by supporting students to be healthy. Thus, I think that the university should invest their funds to several faculties, especially for the physical activities, that support students’ education in many aspects.
To start with, physical activities facilities help student to enhance their every aspect of character. University is not a place for just theoretical study, but place for the education for a whole man. The students should become qualified the people who equipped the socializing skills. To illustrate this, the academy like military, navy, air force focus on the high quality of character to be an officer in military such as the physical ability, honor, leadership, integrity, and honesty. Because of the reason I mention above, cadets struggle to learn the way for being a perfect human who equipped every kinds of character. The efforts of the four years’ life in the academy lead cadets to make their goal eventually. The curriculum and facilities of the academy including physical activities faculties, devices, and program provide cadets to reach their goal. In a long run the cadets become a person who draws their country for the future.
In addition, physical activities faculties provide students the chance to keep their healthy life mentally and physically. The early age of twenty of person can be represented for the most important era for physical development. In addition, the physical status of stability is directly related to mental health. For example, before I enter the academy, I was just an ordinary student who is not perfectly superior to the others and live a sedentary life in my room by reading a book or playing a video game. I don’t have any idea about dealing with some kinds of stress that came from oppression of studying for the SAT in
In conclusion, these situation can be applied the common university students. They have the authorities to achieve their goal for the future of them and the world. I believe that the university should give students the opportunities to access the way for such future by support them not only the place just for learning the knowledge but also the chance to enlighten their physical abilities.
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