The period of high schools( High school days are) is very important. Not just because it is the last course of study( stages of school courses) before going to universities, but also because( not also~but also를 쓰고싶으신가요?) high school students will be about to jump into a real world.
=High school years are essential for all students because not only high schools are the last stages of school courses before going to universities but also students can be well prepared to jump into a real world at high schools..) To prepare for getting used to the world , I strongly agree with the statement.
=To be ready to run to the tough real world,we should not underestimate the importance of the high shcool years.(제 생각에 더좋을것 같은 문장 옆에 써둘 꼐요 )
First of all, students can focus on the subjects that will prepare them to have better for future careers.
paragraph시작할때 topic을 말해주는것도 좋은방법인것같네요, 바로 이유를 설명하는것보다.
뭐 예를들어, It is important to study subjects that students want to study at highschools because ~~
For example, if you want to be a doctor, you would take many science courses. That is, you could become more familiar with and knowledgeable about the field of the study. This is why I want high schools to let students study what they are interested in.
Besides, students will be more open to learning when they can choose their own classes. It is obvious that taking classes you want than taking requirements is being more productive and is making students more enthusiastic. >> more productive with more enthusiasm..간단히, As I mentioned above, it is clear and simple. Ask yourself. If you have to take a history class you actually hate and you have no choice but to take. Do you think it will be fine when you take it? Absolutely not. (이런 짧은 질문대답은 원래
정통에세이에서는 바디에 별로 쓰지 않는데요, 토플은 모르겠지만요, 만약에 써도 콩쿨루젼에 쓰던가,
아님 강하게 한번 묻고 대답하는걸로 하시는게 에세이가 더 좋아 보일것 같네요, 너무 짧게 많아요,
너무 많으면 아무래도 에세이를 캐주얼하게 만들수도 있으니까요 조심하시구요,.) Lectures must be horrible for you. As you can notice here, no matter how many lectures you take, it is not worth if there is none you are interested in.
To sum up, everyone may have a different view on this. Yet, I firmly believe that letting students study what they actually want is far more suitable in these days and is making students prepare for their future careers more efficiently. As we all know, the world is changing much faster than we expected. Therefore, students should be ones for what the world needs, which are specialized in a specific field. Again, that is why schools should allow students to study the courses they are interested in.
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