■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Being happy with job is more important than having a high salary. Do U A or dis A | |
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Some people say that being happy with job is more important than having a high salary. I agree that getting a job which is so suitable for them for two reasons. First, people are able to enjoy during work time. Second, we can broaden social network in field of specialty.
Most of all, most people have desire to spend time about their work. Of course, some people argue that money gives a chance doing almost everything. However enjoying is essential part of people’s performance. Let me take my friend for example. Now a day he runs online fashion shop and become millionaire at a young age. Indeed It is desire of working that made possible for him to develop work efficiency. When he was in the last year of high school, he found himself to intensely interested in fashion trend. Sadly however standardize education did nothing to develop his fashion study. So he chose to enroll in online fashion school. There were a lot of people who has same interest with him. So he made unique design clothes and accessories by discussing with club members. His business was not success at the first time. But very a few people who has insight in trend spread to other people. Although he did not chase a lot of money, he had become successful CEO thanks to his interest fashion. In this sense, it is so important to private attitude for future success.
In addition, focusing on interesting job encourage people to make social network in their field. Truly, people who have a lot of money are able to broad friends by using their fortunes. But most people do not think that people as true buddies. However working together person in hard time was able to strongly bond with each others. Let me take my father for example. Whenever my father had a hard time, the people who spend hard working time with my father were so helpful.
No doubt, father would not be on track for happy life if he does not had large circle of working friends from company. This show that social networking at the same specialty is needed for our life. | |
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