In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. |
In my country, adults say to teenagers, "Learning is one's duty as a student." For that reason, most of teenagers are attending at one's school and are studying in Korea. But, in some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. In general, they begin to work at middle or high school student. I think this is very good for teenagers.
First, when teenagers start to work, they will be more independent than the teenagers who do not work. In Korea, many people depend on their parents even twenties, thirties and after their marriage. When they not only pay educational expenses but also buy their house, car and etc, they require their parents to help them. Moreover some time ago, I read the article about a 'helicopter-mom'. It is a mom who hovers over every state in her child's development, from basically. This situation makes more dependent adults. Therefore, teenagers must have a job for to be an independent person.
Second, if teenagers have jobs, they will not waste money. They have a tendency to consider their parents as a earning machine. And they spend money recklessly because they don't know the difficulty of labor. In my case, after I have worked, I do not sink money that earn myself. Thus, having jobs assists that teenagers have a proper consuming habit.
Last, working gives teenagers new experiences and is an opportunity for teenagers to learn at firsthand about the world. The knowledge from the book and the school is a limit. There is nothing like as somethings from one's experience. Through a work, teenagers can feel worth the trouble and before the graduation, they can meet with the social life. Besides, they will have respect for their parents who devote themselves to look after their children.
In conclusion, teenagers must study and have part-time jobs. The student who just studies in the school may grow into the adult who knows little of the world. Accordingly, I think having jobs as teenagers is a good idea. I hope many Korean students combine learning and working like American students. |
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