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The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong
most of the people living in 21st century constantly confront endless decisions they got to make either in a long term or in a short moment. some decisions require long period of time to organize thoughts and think about its consequences. however,it's not true that every decisions made quickly are always wrong. some decisions which need strong confidence and motivation are better be made quickly since these can last just temporally and disappear soon. Thus, I disagree that the decisions people make quickly are always wrong.
First of all, In a commonsense, not every decision needs a long period of time. of course, some require time to organize your thoughts and think about the consequences following its decision. however, other decisions which have obvious consequence have no reason to take a long time. For example, deciding a restaurant for dinner or choosing menu don't requite complicated thinking. Thus, this kind of decision has no need to take time.
Secondly, Some decisions are actually better made quickly than in a long period of time. strong confidence and courage to make decisions are usually temporally and can disappear soon. Thus, the faster it takes to decide, the better your decision is. To make a personal example, when I got a lecture on future designing, I got totally motivated and got a strong confidence. so right after getting home, I made the decision to make library membership to study more frequently. By this quick decision, I could start studying much harder than before. however, If i didn't make my decision to register for library member immediately, I could have just lost my motivation and forgotten about that idea. Thus, sometimes, quick decision even make better consequences.
In conclusion, some decisions need to be made with plenty of time to organize thoughts and think about its consequences. However, there are also the decisions which don't require a long period of time and better be made quickly. so I disagree that quick made decisions are always wrong.