Young people nowadays do not help their communities. Agree/Disagree |
Some people say that since youngsters nowadays are selfish, they do not
work for their communities. However I agree that young people have a ,빠졌구요 positive effect on their communities for two reasons.
First, they are positive and self-sacrificing. Second, they participate in
social activity more than the past.
Above all, young people are full of activities. Although they are partially
seem to be individualistic and do not aid their communities, their positive
behavior even help their country. A few years ago, one Korean student
studied abroad in Japan. One day, when he was in station in order to went abroad는 빼주세요. to 동원 to his dormitory, he saw that one person fell down to the railroad. In spite
of a train come to the railroad, he jumped into the track to save the of a train coming to the railroad, person. Unfortunately, although the person who fell down on the track
survived, the korean student was killed by the train. If he was egoistic, he was ->had been(가정법과거완료) would have seen the person without doing anything. After he died, a ->wouldn't have helped the person. without 이하삭제, relationship between Japan and Korea improved and reception of Korean reception->attitude towards Korean became more friendly. who were lived in Japan was better than the past. This demonstrates that
youngster's self-sacrificing behavior has a positive impact on all over the
country.
Besides, a rate of participation in social activity augments more and more. ->there are more and more youth who take part in community services. With the development of the internet, youngsters tend to active in cyber to be more active space. However this method is bveing a medium of conneting to social , 찍고, -this 이하는 무슨의미인지 모르겠네요.. issue. This year, in Korea, an accident of oil outflow has broken. Since it there was a horrific ship collision in the West Sea, which led to severe oil pollution near the sea. was the worst accident historically, environmental pollution was serious.
Immediately, young people encouraged people to purify the polluted area,
then many people began to go to the region. Reportedly, youngsters' the site to volunteer. paticipation was more than any others and they were willing to work hard. I far more than the elderly. was also took part in the operation for a week, delaying my personal work.
Surprisingly, many of young people stayed and worked in the area more
than two weeks. This shows that youngsters contribute to many part of
communities. ->community services.
In conclusion, I agree that nowadays young people assist their
communities in many ways for the reasons that i have mentioned above.
시간되는 대로 고쳐봤어요. 근데 어려운 단어를 일부러 많이 쓸려고 하지말고 쉽게 써보고, 신문기사등을 잘 오려서 특정용어를 정확하게 쓰도록 노력해 보세요. 신문 많이 읽지 말고 관심있는거 하루에 하나씩...모범에세이 외우는 것도 좋지만 일단 쉬운용어로 자신의 의사를 전달하는것이 더 중요할듯 합니다.
한글로 먼저 브레인스토밍을 하려고 해도...잘 못쓰겠구요.. 모범 에세이를 다 외우려고 해도..시간이 너무 많이 걸리고 또 그렇다고 외우더라도 그 관련 주제가 아니면 쓸수도 없구요..-_-;;
고득점 자 분들은 라이륑 공부 어떻게 하세요~?
그냥 모범 에세이 계속 읽고 자기가 쓰는게 가장 빠른가요~?
모범 에세이를 그냥 외우지 않고 읽으면서 좋은 표현만 자기것으로 만드는게 좋은 방법일까요~?
절 구원해주세요...ㅜ.ㅜ....
시간이 얼마 없는데....되는게 하나도 없네요..... |