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Your city has plans to build a new arena where the community garden now is. Dispute that proposal. In your answer use specific reasons and examples to support your position. |
In my opinion, building a new arena would not be a good idea. Especially, since it is supposed to replace garden area which has lots of roles in society, it’s not going to be smart choice if the construction is performed. First of all, in human society, it’s getting hard to find clean and neat region because of reckless development regardless of the place, raging from suburban area to central city area. Recently, there has been lots of movement for green and nature which have helped humans to get refreshed by its invisible power throughout history. Humans are tying to recover nature in that it can assist human to live in a good condition. Above all, human’s health problem shows why the community garden should be remained. For a long time, nature circumstances like garden have been playing an important role to help humans get healthy energy. If humans have more time to spend in a clean environment where trees and birds are, various kinds of diseases are going to be reduced thanks to the green nature. Secondly, in the long run, the community garden will be playing more significant role in protection. Even if constructing a new building could give benefits in many fields regardless of what sort of shops were placed in that building, humans will face critical barrier in the near future if there are not enough natural places to protect them. For example, these days, a lot of problems such as oil, water are causing crisis in human society. The world gap between the poor and the rich is going up and a series of natural disaster is attacking the world because humans don’t have plentiful defense methods such as trees and rocks, especially in the city town. Therefore, having the community garden would benefit all people living in that area in the long run in that they can help humans to prevent natural disaster and provide places to take a rest. In addition, spending less time in the modernized building could give more chances to human beings not to waste much oil, riding a car under the air conditional. In conclusion, replacing community garden with a new building will not produce positive results in two ways. Not only human’s health problem is going to increase if the community garden was vanished, but human’s power against various problems such as flood, stresses will be decreased. For theses reasons, I think that the community garden should be maintained. |