Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
Recently, I see many students study so hard, work, take part time job, in order to earn a lot of money in the future; and they think it will be a great success. It is success. However, I disagree with this becuase I don't see only people who earn a lot of money are successful, but, I also see people who say that they are successful in happiness of taking their desired job regardless of salary. In addition, people often choose suicidal over money although they are successful. I will explain those two facts.
To begin with, I watched on the media that some people saying that they are successful in happiness with not possessing a lot of money. They took jobs which were their favorite hobby withought receiving full payment. They were pretty sure that they reached their goal with doing what they really want to do everyday, in other words, success. Through hearing this, I have started to believe that money does not drive people's successfulness, but other thing also can make them successful.
Secondly, This fact also shows me that money do not cause people's successfulness. Some people choose to die over money, probably becuase they have so much money, that can not be controlled. For example, a CEO suicided because he thought that earning a lot of money would make his life happier, but he was not happy at all becuase he started to lose people around him over his fortune.
In addition, right before his death, he wrote that "I devoted my entire life earning money becuase I was very very poor in young, which I hated. However, now I find myself in misery becuase of my fortune. People obey me but they are so disguised"
Those two I have mentioned above had let me beliving earning money do not make people successful but I think it depends on a person. Having full happiness, but a little bit of money is enough to be successful, so, I think, the true successfulness is what people find themselves enjoying.
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