■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. | |
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Based on the incredible devepoment of technologies, people can live more convenient lives. However, conveninece itself is not enough to make the world a better place to live. I strongly believe that techologies have induced serious problems such as environmental destruction and have made people to be isolated.
First of all, the environment was critically damaged by technologies. Advance in technologies fuelled industrialization and urbanization. Plant and cars emiited many kinds of environment pollutants such as carbon dioxdie into air, which has caused global warming. Also, while constructing cities, people wiped out forests, and concentration of poplution on cities produced a plenty of wastes, which overrided the self-pufitying capacity of the nature. As a result, enormous species of animals and plants are endangered and it is considerable that without diversity of creatures, the world cannot be a good place to live. Moreover, people suffer from more diseases than the past because many chemicals wasted from indutries are known to cause serious illness such as asthma or cancer.
It is also important to notice that technologies made people isolated. People have reduced chances to work with other people since companies do not need many workers in single work places after they adopted computers and automized systems. Also, the advent of the Internet made people to do many tasks at home. For example, some companies employed the work-at-home system and online shopping became so popular that people do not need to go out for shopping. Thus, modern people do not spend as much time as the past in interacting with others. Because human being is a social animal, weakened human relationships make people feel lonely and isolated.
In coclusion, I firmly believe that techologies caused significant negative effects on the environment and human beings; the environmental has been destroyed seriously and people feel isolated. These disadvantages are drawing the earth to a worse place to live.
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