■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Watching a performance in person is more enjoyable than watching it on a televison. | |
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Accroding to develop importance of well-being, many people believe that leisure is important to them such as watching performance. watching performance is good activity. in this regard, where the performance occurs that is more considerable point for people who pursuing well-being.
In my opinion, watching a performance in person is more enjoyable than watching it on televison. This is because it is more activitier and gives them to good social place.
First of all, watching live performance is more activiter than watching it on televison. The viewer who attend live performance can see directly performancers adn share emotion conversation together. For example, the survey shows that the person who attended live performance more exicted state than the persom who watched on televison after finsihed same performance.
In addition, live performance provides good social place for people.
the people who have same object to enjoy the performance. so they can talk about performance and enjoy togeter. For example, when i met person who enjoy performance with me i have connecting with that person untii now.
To sum up, watching a performance in person is attractive option for viewer who want to see more enjoyable performance and gain good friends.
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