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1. In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice. As many education and information technologies are getting increased, considerable amounts of students consider that their next generations will be able to study at home instead of going to a traditional school. However, I would prefer to study at traditional schools for the following reasons. First of all, students can have more chances to share ideas and thoughts with others. In addition, it must be much easier for students to focus on their studies. To begin with, taking traditional schools offers students many chances to interact and share ideas with their friends. Of course, if young people take classes at home through online communication channels, it would be very comfortable at first. However, those feeling comfortable will only last a short period of time; most of students cannot usually seating on the chair for a while and staying at home all day long. As a result, they will desire to go to their schools to meet their friends in person and play some active sports. Eventually, for students, having interaction and sharing their thoughts with other friends are even more significant than those of comfortable feelings. To be specific, schools are the ones where young students can get to meet their friends and share ideas and thoughts with each other about weekly gossips and surprising events. And this is the most effective way to relieve their stresses for students. If, in the future, students do not have to come to school with the development of many technologies, most of students will not be able to enjoy this kind of thing easily in their daily routines. In this regard, taking a traditional school is better than studying at home for many students Furthermore, taking traditional course at school is better for young people since they will be able to easily concentrate on their studies. It is true that, some parents over solicitous for their children’s education might be able to guide and control their kids to focus on their lecture materials. However, in general, it is really difficult for parents to keep watching their children while their kids are engaged in lectures materials since all of their mothers and fathers do not usually have time to spend with them due to their suffocating works. As a result, taking a traditional schools should be keep continue. To illustrate, as many entertainment things are getting increased and developed, students are easily attracted by such things like computers and video games. If children keep doing this, after they finally take classes at home, there is no doubt that but they will definitely be addicted by games and do not try to study harder. On the contrary, if students attend classes at school, with their own teachers’ attention and care, they can be fully focused on study materials as well as their teachers’ lectures. In this sense, going to schools and attending a traditional way of studying will be more beneficial for students’ efficient studying. |