★ AGREE OR DISAGREE THAT MOVIES AND TELEVISION HAVE NEGATIVE EFFECTS THAN POSITIVE EFFECTS ON YOUNG PEOPLE'S BEHAVIOR ★
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In the modern world, mass media has developed significantly and it (‘makes’ is too strong) introduces various TV programs and movies to children. Some people argue that TV and movies have a positive effect on children. However, I strongly disagree. TV and movies have a bad influence on children because they have a great deal of harmful contents and watching TV and movies in a long time is unhealthful acting. To begin with, a lot of detrimental contents are made continuously and children can face these through TV and movies. Expanding cable TV industries make a chance to use various themes including violent and suggestive contents. Not only that, but 30% of movies are of a violent nature. Because this genre is one of the most famous. Children are innocent. So it is important they are not influenced by the more negative aspects of life. However, on TV and the internet they can be exposed to harmful programs. Children do not yet have a sense to weigh these programs up for example whether they are bad or not. And young people may behave similar to the contents they have seen. We can see evidence of this on the news. Crimes by children are increasing and it is becoming a social problem. Undoubtedly, TV and movies have also some of beneficial contents, such as education programs and documentaries. However, a number of them are easily missed by children. I believe that TV and movies comprising detrimental themes have a negative effect on children. On top of that, watching TV and movies are not good for youngster’s health. Characters in the action movie show gorgeous scenes and MC in a famous talk show make a program conspicuous through their wit. Children think nothing but also move their body little during watching them. The average time about children watching TV is 4 hours, and this is the same that during 4 hours children do not have beneficial time ether physical or mind psychical. For example, my young sister’s personality was outgoing. Since she entered an elementary school, she increased TV watching. Her behavior gave a rise to increase sitting time and to abhor outer sports. I think that watching TV and movies is an action wasting time to Young people who need worthwhile experiences, such as reading books, exercising, socializing and interactions with other. |