Young people enjoy life more than older people |
As people age, they begin to find the best and the most suitable ways of living their lives. Even if some claim that young people are healthier and dreamier than older ones, I strongly believe that old people have more enjoyable life than those that are young. The rationales behind this are people gain their own know-how of being happy and reduce their burdens as they age.
To begin with, older people know how to enjoy their lives by trial and error. By actually experiencing hardships and difficulties in their lives, people learn the most profitable ways to spend rest of their lives with happiness. The best illustration is baby. In order to walk for the first times, babies spend vast time failing to stand up and take the first step on their owns. Once they learn how to walk, they gain their know-how on walking. Not only walking, but also they start learning from simple tasks to hard and much more complex works. This example shows that people find easier ways to spend their lives through trial and error.
Furthermore, older people have less burden than those who are young. In other words, as people age, they begin to take off their burdens such as taking care of their children, making money for family, or getting pressure from competitions in their communities or society. For example, my grandmother spends very pleasant days due to the lack of worries, whereas I get pressure and stress from school works. Since I have to make friends, socialize with people, study for tests, and compete with others, I easily fall into sadness. However, my grandmother's life is simply and more enjoyable since she was already retired from her work, and all of her children were married and left home for independce. Likewise, it is an undeniable truth that younger people have more worries and stress from their burdens than older ones.
To sum up, people learn to enjoy life through failures and experiences. On top of that, their burdens fade away or are solved as they live more ages. For these reasons, it is clear that older people can have more delightful life.
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