■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :It is more important to spend time at work than to spend time with family | |
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There might different opinions regarding whethere spending time at work is more important than spending time with family members. Personally, I strongly disagree with the above statement for two reasons. First, spending time with family give people emotional comfort. Moreover, the time of spending with family is limited, unlike the work hours.
To begin with, people are able to have comfortable time and relieve stress by spending with their family members. In today's society, a majority of people are suffocated with overwhelming workloads and thus, they lead a stressful lives. At this point, it is family members who can give people to be realxed by talking and having a great time each other.
According to a survey released by Korean National Center, more than two thirds of the workers who live alone without their family responded that they feel much more stress by living alone than when they lived with their family. Based on this study, workers who live on thier own feel isolated ,especially after leaving thier office. This is because there are no one to talk with them about thier suffering day. Even if they have a roomate or friend, they are not understandin enough when compare to their family. In this sense, people are in need to have a great amount of time with thier family in this modern society.
Moreover, the time that we have with family dose not last long. In general, people are capable of working when they get old. However, people have quite limited time that we are actually able to spend with their family members, especially thier parents who are much older than them. In this regard, there is no doubt that we have to consume a great amount of time with our family in given our life time.
For example, my friend who is very successful CEO was pretty obsessed with her carrer five years ago and she rarely had a time to meet their family. Before long, when she finally got a place of CEO in her work, her mother was passed away because of car accident. She was cried everyday and repented that she did not even call her parents due to her busy life. After that she realized that family is the most important her life among others. In this sense, it is obvious that people should focus on being with thier family rather than working too much.
In a nutshell, it is more significant to put much time with thier family other than working in terms of emotional health and precious short time than we can share with family.
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