■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Cars are more influential than airplanes. | |
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Amongst modern technologies or equipments that make our lives flourished, transportations is one of the most things that have made a rapid progress. The invention of car enables people to reach some destinations safely and quickly. In addition, the airplane makes the world the so-called one day life zone. Although both have significant merits to use , people are prone to value airplanes rather than cars in terms of social problems and the growth of world business.
When it comes to air pollution from the exhaust emission of cars, many people are worrying about the issue. Since people could not abandon using cars thanks to their big usefulness, people once were in trouble in gathering answers about what to do to reduce the air contamination. In order to solve the problem, people foster the concept of public transportation such as subways adopting electronic powers and attempt to develop the condition of subways to convey more people safely and comfortably. After all, the proportion of using cars is descending in comparison with a decade ago. In addition, the traffic jam from myriads of cars causes immense social costs and the problem of parking as well. Nowadays, people consider that these negative effects eclipse the merits of using cars.
On top of that, considering that the current status of world economy puts great emphasis on international trades, airplane is more useful than before. Actually, confronting emergent problems or waiting for final negotiation of contracts, people want to communicate directly because they can reduce unnecessary time and procedures to deal with their work. At this time, the most effective transportation would be airplanes for business trips. The point that although massive products usually are traded by ships or trains, high value added electronic equipments such as mobile-phones and computers are delivered by airplane without exception proves again the utility of airplane.
Finally, I believe that airplane is crucial role in our lives in that it can deliver many people at one time comparing with cars and reduce business hours. However, although cars are still familiar with people’s lives to move, the utility of cars is eclipsed by the shortcomings mentioned above | |
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